Poetry - الشعر

[الغزير]

.yes it is my own,but you make it more better than i did,Thanks dr

and so that

اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة : منتظر النايف Oh, moon of the beautiful, You, rose of November, You are always in mind to remember, For me you are so fanciful: You have descended from the skies, And later, back to heaven you will rise.

which yuo wrote is really wonderful


.about separate room i agree with you

and if you dont mind see this paragraph plz


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...I have back again

...to my sad room

Oh yeh, I am room agein

whith 4walls locked door

.and my heavy bain

Agein, One more time

, I have to live the dark

.I have to see the bane

But my mind is not coming with me

It stays there

Flying like abird

!?But where

Just around her

And i would that she know

Every thing is change

even my mien

And i well never cry again

Oh, so sorry

Really I am so sorry

,Now i feel that

I am going to cry again

.And again

Because a piece of me is ther

.Not coming with me again

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بشر يا دكتورنا العزيز عساها مقبولة معنى ومبنى. وتذكر أن أنجليزيتي ليست ولا بد .. إذ أننا نفتقد الممارسة ، وأنت تقدم لنا خدمة جليلة بأن نستعيد بعض الذي مضى، فجزاك الله عنا كل خير.

تحياتي.