Poetry - الشعر

[الغزير]

... One Day

... When I Was Young

... They

...Told Me The Life Is Fun

...But Now

... Yah Naw

... I Want To Say

...They Are Wrong

... Yah The Are Wrong

... The Life Is Strong

...It Is Strong

... Strong

بشر إن شاء الله صح يا دكتور معنى ومبنى..

[فرح العنزي]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

عندي لكن انا واثقه 100% أنه ال grammer فيه اخطاء واخجل من وضعها .

وهو ماهو شعر ، زي الخواطر ، مجرد تنفيس .
بارك الله فيك.

[منتظر النايف]

Go ahead and publish it for us to read. No need to be ashamed of our own work. Besides, we are not native speakers of English. It's OK we make mistakes. Besides, I am sure you have heard of the the following proverb: To err is human.

It is OK that we make mistakes as long as we improve and get better each time we make something new. Besides, sometimes grammar mistakes may be overlooked in poetry - to a certain extent in fact.

I think everything is difficult the first time we do it.

Hey come on. You must see my first work that I produced 16 years ago. My teacher's corrections were more than I wrote myself!

اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة : فرح العنزي بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم عندي لكن انا واثقه 100% أنه ال grammer فيه اخطاء واخجل من وضعها . وهو ماهو شعر ، زي الخواطر ، مجرد تنفيس . بارك الله فيك.

[منتظر النايف]

You must be kidding! This is more than wonderful. This is your own, isn't it? But if you allow me to make a few suggestions so that meter becomes fine:

When I was young,
They told me life is fun.
But now,
Yeh, now,
I want to say they're wrong.
Oh yeh, they are wrong.
Life's strong!
It's strong!
So strong!

Keep up the good work. This is wonderful. You know? Perhaps it is good if we can publish participants' poems in a separate room. We can vote for the best and see what the administration can offer for the winner. Let's see.

اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة : الغزير ... One Day ... When I Was Young ... They ...Told Me The Life Is Fun ...But Now ... Yah Naw ... I Want To Say ...They Are Wrong ... Yah The Are Wrong ... The Life Is Strong ...It Is Strong ... Strong بشر إن شاء الله صح يا دكتور معنى ومبنى..